(MEETING 4): identifying narrative paragraph with and without topic sentence

“ My great experience”

Three years ago, I was a student of senior high school of kartikatama metro. When I was second grade in that school, I followed a program from my senior high school to studied english for one month with some menthors from pare kediri in my campus one. So I leaved all of my activity in school. From my class just three students who followed this program, and one of them was me. I went to campus one with my friends from another class and some of my teachers. (orientation) .The activity in campus one was so full and serious, it made me so tired and I almost gave up because of it. And our menthors were very decipline. First We must woke up early morning then prayed subuh in the mosque, then prepared to sdudied. At six am, we started to studied english together with our menthor. At seven am we had breakfast and studied again until waited the time to prayed zhuhur. After we have prayed and lunch we continued our studied until five pm. If we spoken in bahasa, we will got the punishment from them. We started to studied again after we prayed magrib and had dinner. Finally we can take a rest in our room after at nine pm. During we stayed there, we can’t go to anywhere and can’t meet anyone. Our handphone was also brought by our headmaster. And it was really killed me. (complication) But when Saturday we got a free day, so we didn’t study and we can used our handphone to called our parents or our friends. Sometimes, we went to somewhere together, swam together, ate in outside together and done sport to refresh our mind. Altough it was very complicated activity, but I felt so happy because I can do that all together with my beloved friends. I also  proud can follow this program because I can add my english knowledge and of course made my english was be better than before. So I never regreted ever followed this program. (resolution)

Analyze the text

Theme             : Great experience

Introducing  : Three years ago, I was a student of senior high school of kartikatama metro. When I was second grade in that school, I followed a program from my senior high school to studied english for one month with some menthors from pare kediri in my campus one.

Plot                 : Back

Characters      : I, my friends,(patient), menthors (decipline), Headmaster (wise, decipline)

Setting           : -place              : in campus one “kartikatama”

                          -time              : three years ago

                          -situation     : serious

Climax            : The activity in campus one was so full and serious, it made me so tired and I almost gave up because of it.

Conclution     : Altough it was very complicated activity, but I felt so happy because I can do that all together with my beloved friends. I also  proud can follow this program because I can add my english knowledge and of course made my english was be better than before. So I never regreted ever followed this program.

The purpose of this text : to entertain the readers about my story “my great experience”.

Note    : the underline sentences are the topic sentence.

supporting sentence :

-So I leaved all of my activity in school. From my class just three students who followed this program, and one of them was me. I went to campus one with my friends from another class and some of my teachers.

-First We must woke up early morning then prayed subuh in the mosque, then prepared to sdudied. At six am, we started to studied english together with our menthor. At seven am we had breakfast and studied again until waited the time to prayed zhuhur. After we have prayed and lunch we continued our studied until five pm. If we spoken in bahasa, we will got the punishment from them. We started to studied again after we prayed magrib and had dinner. Finally we can take a rest in our room after at nine pm. During we stayed there, we can’t go to anywhere and can’t meet anyone. Our handphone was also brought by our headmaster. And it was really killed me.

-I can do that all together with my beloved friends.